Count up to the end of the world
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Tiredandhungry
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
so... 23 and 11?
Tiredandhungry- Queefmaster Joe
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
Yup. Now 24 and 12, because we're just that awesome.
Anyone know any good words to put in a poem? I'm kind of stuck on the last lines. xP
Anyone know any good words to put in a poem? I'm kind of stuck on the last lines. xP
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
well whats the poem?
rhyme pattern? I forget the technical term
oh 25 - 13
rhyme pattern? I forget the technical term
oh 25 - 13
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Lol, ok. 26 and 14.
So now the wind still listens
To the doubt of darkened blade
The broken edge of fantasy
For it an end has made.
Life’s a distant daydream
And the screams are drawing near
Fate has forgotten fury
I’ve invoked ha'di , I fear
You know, basic ABCB stuff. A very simple rhyme scheme, anyway. This is like most of the way through but I can't think of anything else. xP (Sorry for the sucky quality. I'll go through and edit it later so it sounds better.) :/
So now the wind still listens
To the doubt of darkened blade
The broken edge of fantasy
For it an end has made.
Life’s a distant daydream
And the screams are drawing near
Fate has forgotten fury
I’ve invoked ha'di , I fear
You know, basic ABCB stuff. A very simple rhyme scheme, anyway. This is like most of the way through but I can't think of anything else. xP (Sorry for the sucky quality. I'll go through and edit it later so it sounds better.) :/
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
27 = 15
well here are a list of my 10 favorites no particular order and you already used one so i'll replace it with another
1. Eternity
2. Almagest
3. Sunder
4. Rive (originally Fury)
5. Havoc
6. Ruination
7. Quickening
8. Cosmic
9. Essence
10. Entropy
well here are a list of my 10 favorites no particular order and you already used one so i'll replace it with another
1. Eternity
2. Almagest
3. Sunder
4. Rive (originally Fury)
5. Havoc
6. Ruination
7. Quickening
8. Cosmic
9. Essence
10. Entropy
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
28 and 16
I can't use eternity or havoc, those are written further up. Cosmic sounds good but it has no use in this story, lol. The others might work, I'm just going to come back to it later. xD
I can't use eternity or havoc, those are written further up. Cosmic sounds good but it has no use in this story, lol. The others might work, I'm just going to come back to it later. xD
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29 > 17
Sweet 7/10
Sweet 7/10
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
30 & 18
Lol, yes. Good for you.
Lol, yes. Good for you.
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
31<19
mind=blown
I'm actually a bit jealous
I gave up my artistic side...
I stopped, drawing, writing, and poetry to dedicate myself to the mastery of swords.
And of course I ended up giving up the sword to master the talon.
mind=blown
I'm actually a bit jealous
I gave up my artistic side...
I stopped, drawing, writing, and poetry to dedicate myself to the mastery of swords.
And of course I ended up giving up the sword to master the talon.
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
32 and also 20
I have no artistic side. I'm trying to create one. xP
To the mastery of swords, hmm? Interesting, you don't see much of that nowadays.
Must be pretty cool to know how to use those correctly.
I have no artistic side. I'm trying to create one. xP
To the mastery of swords, hmm? Interesting, you don't see much of that nowadays.
Must be pretty cool to know how to use those correctly.
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33 vs 21
No artistic side? Well you could've fooled me lol.
For the sake of knowledge and ability, it's very cool.
But not much practical usage.
That why I'm working on adapting my kungfu style to utilize the talons im working on
Steel gauntlets essentially with the fingers molded into well, talons.
It wont be the punching or the kicking that's deadly but rather the rending flesh from bone.
Also want to thicken the plating. They currently can catch the blade of a sword, but prolonged practice with that might damage it too much.
It also ties into learning iron body. Being able to take powerful hits without so much as flinching. I'm not at that point yet, but im still working on it.
And if she hasn't changed her mind, Mediocrity was rather eager to try beating the shit out of me.
No artistic side? Well you could've fooled me lol.
For the sake of knowledge and ability, it's very cool.
But not much practical usage.
That why I'm working on adapting my kungfu style to utilize the talons im working on
Steel gauntlets essentially with the fingers molded into well, talons.
It wont be the punching or the kicking that's deadly but rather the rending flesh from bone.
Also want to thicken the plating. They currently can catch the blade of a sword, but prolonged practice with that might damage it too much.
It also ties into learning iron body. Being able to take powerful hits without so much as flinching. I'm not at that point yet, but im still working on it.
And if she hasn't changed her mind, Mediocrity was rather eager to try beating the shit out of me.
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
34 to 22
I'm really late to the writing of this.
xD Talons sound cool as well. I'd love to see a picture of them sometime.
And wow. O_O That's interesting.
I'm really late to the writing of this.
xD Talons sound cool as well. I'd love to see a picture of them sometime.
And wow. O_O That's interesting.
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Re: Count up to the end of the world
35 - 23
Will do lol
Will do lol
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