My Response To People WHo Try And Correct People's Poetry
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My Response To People WHo Try And Correct People's Poetry
Here is a lovely poem for Idiots,
Here the lines are, standing in a row.
Every line is neat and fine,
And with the last one, this line rhymes,
Easy, prompt with simplicity in tow.
Here is a small ditty for simpletons,
Much easier then the last one on the mind.
Pick a tune and sing along,
It even fits in to a song!
An easy read for those not word-inclined.
Here is a English Teacher’s nightmare,
Not a single meaning lies betwixt.
Nothing to over-analyse,
This poem is lazy in disguise.
Cats.
Here the lines are, standing in a row.
Every line is neat and fine,
And with the last one, this line rhymes,
Easy, prompt with simplicity in tow.
Here is a small ditty for simpletons,
Much easier then the last one on the mind.
Pick a tune and sing along,
It even fits in to a song!
An easy read for those not word-inclined.
Here is a English Teacher’s nightmare,
Not a single meaning lies betwixt.
Nothing to over-analyse,
This poem is lazy in disguise.
Cats.
Re: My Response To People WHo Try And Correct People's Poetry
The third stanza I would say is the best of them all
MothDestroyer- Cabin Crew
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Re: My Response To People WHo Try And Correct People's Poetry
"Cats". Perfect last line for this poem. Well done. xD
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Re: My Response To People WHo Try And Correct People's Poetry
i can see where poetry can be critiqued for expansion and improvement, because fuck have i heard some awful poetry and it just elicited nothing fabulous in my loins, but to be harsh about it is unproductive.
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